I'm not sure if I'm going to submit this as my Common App essay...

<p>I have written an essay that I might submit as my Common App essay. Would anyone (current college students and ones who have been on the board for a long time) be willing to read, critique, and give me advice on my essay and whether or not I should use it?</p>

<p>Princeton is one of my very top choices, so any advice from Princeton students would be greatly appreciated. :)</p>