<p>please read my penn personal essay! this was written last minute and i'm not sure whether or not it's PERSONAL enough to be a personal essay...</p>
<p>thanks!</p>
<p>14 hits and no one wants to read it? it’s funny…it’s risky…</p>
<p>i’ll read it.</p>
<p>just a tip: get your parents’ feedback on it. You don’t have to show them the essay, just briefly tell them what its about and see if they like it.</p>
<p>they read it…i’m not sure if they understand it</p>
<p>your fourth paragraph is a little confusing. Were you puking or something?</p>
<p>i never mentioned anything about puking…</p>
<p>i’ll read it, pm it over if you want</p>
<p>ill read it!
PM me!</p>
<p>pm me ill read</p>
<p>i’ll be happy to read!</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you want to</p>
<p>ill read it.
pm me.</p>
<p>i’ll read it!</p>