Im writing my first college application essay...

<p>My topic is: Tell us something about your self that is not included on your application.
Ive written a rough draft and i just really want someone to read it and see if im on the right track. Im not sure what theyre looking for here and this is my dream school!!!</p>

<p>better late than never</p>

<p>did you want to read it?</p>

<p>nah, gotta work on my own. just saying if its really your DREAM school you should have started earlier</p>