immigration essays - need help editing, PLEASE!

<p>Essay is my lasttt resort!!!
I have a horrible gpa (3.49) & a horrible SAT (1680)</p>

<p>applying to UVA , NYU
I feel like its not upto the mark :(
maybe too personal</p>

<p>i’m not going you apply uva or nyu…you can pm or email it to me</p>

<p>i pmed you, lets swap essays</p>

<p>ok PLEASE let me know honestly :S</p>

<p>THANKYOU guys SOOO much!
i know this is very last minute …but i am really worried :S</p>