<p>Hi all
students who are writing essays and want some 1 here to read it and send a feedback.
my advice is ,go to your high school and let your teacher read it. He will give you better feedback.
a lot of people here are stealing essays ideas and my advice is DON'T BE THE VICTIM.</p>
<p>there are more qualified people out there <em>parents,your school advisors and teachers...etc</em>.</p>