In a rush! Can anyone read my common app essay?!!

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<p>I'm screwed..9 days left and i haven't have anyone read my essay..can anyone help PLEASE..?? Thanks a lot!!!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, so PM it to me. I’ll do what I can; I’m great with analyzing the specific aspects of essays (grammar, diction, syntax, tone, etc.), but not as great with analyzing for the “big picture.” I’ll try focusing on the big picture as well, but you should also get another peer editor’s perspective on that. After all, the more peer editors you have, the better your essay will be!</p>

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<p>That is very false. To quote: <a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/25018-editing-your-college-essays.html[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/25018-editing-your-college-essays.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

<p>"Good writing is not the result of a democratic process; it requires a unified vision and execution. When seeking the editing advice of others, don’t let their suggested changes change the overall “voice” of your essay unless the voice needs changing. By incorporating too many “editing suggestions” for word changes, sentence structure, etc., the essay can quickly fall apart and lose the sense that it’s coming from you. "</p>

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<p>i’ll read it. you’re not in a rush, 9 days is a lot. i still haven’t written the majority of my essays.</p>