In a rush! Can anyone read my common app essay?!!

<p>I’ll read it, so PM it to me. I’ll do what I can; I’m great with analyzing the specific aspects of essays (grammar, diction, syntax, tone, etc.), but not as great with analyzing for the “big picture.” I’ll try focusing on the big picture as well, but you should also get another peer editor’s perspective on that. After all, the more peer editors you have, the better your essay will be!</p>