I thought my babson application was due Feb 15, instead its due jan 15. I just finished writing the essay adn I need to pass in the application tomorrow at schoool. My AIM is mohsin287, I need someone to read it and help me edit it very quickly I’d greatly appreciate it… Thanks its below…
Dear Future Roommate,
<pre><code>Hello! My name is …and I will be your roommate for freshman year at Babson College. Im very excited to meet you and start life at Babson College. I am from Attleboro, Massachusetts, a suburb of Boston. I have two older sisters, and I am the youngest. Although I was born in the U.S, I am of Pakistani heritage. I will not be the perfect roommate; I admit I have a myriad of flaws. I am extremely unorganized, something I get chastised for at home all the time. I feel the need to study at odd hours, and I am slow at making friends. Of course everybody thinks that they are unique, and that is true, for everyone is unique in their own way. But I can assure you, you will never find a roommate like me. I have a passion for trivia; my most favorite pastime is memorizing useless facts. Over the years, I have acquired immense esoteric knowledge in world geography, history, U.S. presidents, English Vocabulary, and my favorite World capitals. I dont have any numbers in my phone book, I have memorized all the numbers I need to know. During silent reading in school, while everyone else reads a novel I read the dictionary. While others might think Im weird, I dont care I value my individuality. There is no doubt; living with me will be totally different to anything you have been accustomed to. But I can assure you I wont be blasting my punk rock music at 3 A.M.
Upon visiting Babson, I realized Babson was a perfect match for me. It has a perfect location, just minutes away from Boston, and only an hour drive from my house. I love meeting new people, and at Babson I will be introduced to people of many different backgrounds, I remember reading that one-fourth of Babson students are international. What drove me the most towards Babson is the solidarity, all the students share the same goal; success in the business field. Up until I visited Babson, I thought it would be boring, everyone would be taking the same business classes, and theyd all be rich white kids from New England. But in fact what also drove me to Babson was the fact that half the courses you take are in the Liberal Arts, and after looking at the course catalog I saw that many of these courses were unique and I cant wait to take them. After walking around Babson, I realized I was wrong about my second opinion too, I saw a diverse student body I will meet people from all around the world who share the same goal as me that is what I look forward to the most. I cant wait to meet you and begin college at Babson. Im sure you will enjoy it as much as I will. See you soon!
Sincerely,
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