In need for a critique on my CALS supplement essay ASAP!

[acourtens]

<p>Will anyone look over my essay and give me some feedback and if its ok to submit? Todays my deadline....</p>

[AlexisH]

<p>I can take a look. Just pm me your essay.</p>

[LaPrincesa]

<p>sure send it over to me</p>