In need of brutal essay critics ( 09ers or above please and thank u :] )

<p>PM if you like to read my common app essay ( haha this is the 4th one ive written =.= )
Please be as honest as possible, I know my writing isn't stellar so i can take it :]</p>

<p>Sigh send it over.</p>

<p>I can help you out and throw some honest feedback (or at least I think!) I can also send you some samples of my old essays</p>