In need of proofreader!!! urgent anyone??

<p>Hi i just finished my draft of the common app essay. I know im running short of time deadline is in like 5 days i hate being a procrastinator:(
I havent decided on the topic yet so it should be 5) topic of my choice. I afraid of being too trite sigh
Anyone could do me a big favour by proofreading mine? I will be eternally grateful for any constructive advice. Preferably not people applying for fall 2011 as well Thanks a bunch</p>

<p>I’ll do it if you want. I’m not applying for fall 2011. Message it to me when you want it proofread :)</p>

<p>anyone else can offer to help? i need someone to be harsh on me! anyone? anyone?</p>

<p>i am very willing to help u xD i m gonna beat u and pinch u (gonna be very harsh) for ur mistakes …I am going to apply in 2012 (a junior right now). message me to <a href="mailto:caroline.piku@gmail.com">caroline.piku@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>Thanks for offering to help! anyone else??</p>

<p>Hi people i have revised and polished up my essay! Phew! Anyone else interested to take a look? Thanks a lot!:)</p>

<p>I’d like to help! :slight_smile:
Already wrote my essay, I’m just curious to see how others are writing theirs. And I’d like a good read too.</p>

<p>my essay is kinda long:( whats ur email? i’ll sent it over</p>