In search of critique for my proscratinated essay

College Essays
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<p>So I've finally gotten my Common Application essay into what I consider acceptable shape, but it would definitely benefit from some editing. If anyone is willing to read it, I'm heartily welcoming any feedback.</p>

<p>P.S. It's about my coming out experience, so if you have any objections to gay people it's probably not for you.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>I can read it, will you read mine?</p>

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<p>I will. You don't need to read mine, because I'm still editing it. :)</p>

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<p>"TheOneCurlyFry"----haha, that's really funny!</p>

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<p>I would like to read it</p>