Incredibly intense essay... could someone please look over this?

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<p>I'd love for someone to look over my personal statement. It's quite unique (or at least I think so). No '08 please.</p>

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<p>I’d like to. just pm me it if you accept :slight_smile: i’m 2011</p>

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<p>if you want some advices</p>

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<p>Parent/teacher here. I’ll give you an honest opinion. PM me.</p>

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<p>sure 10 chars</p>

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<p>Feel free to PM–was 07</p>