<p>My admission essay seems a little informal but i want to introduce myself and be able to connect with the Addmission Committee.</p>
<p>Is informal okay?</p>
<p>I wouldn’t use slang. That’s the worst. But if you put alot of voice into it without sounding like a stoner or a surfer dude, I would say thumbs up.</p>
<p>haha thank you.
I dont think i used any slang and i dont think i sound like a surfer dude haha</p>
<p>have you written all your essays?</p>
<p>yeah i did, about a couple weeks ago. i went through this “i love hotchkiss” phase where i was totally into getting into hotchkiss and i finished my application, so that was done.</p>