Initial Essay Impressions

College Essays
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<p>I just finished my <em>rough</em> draft for my Common Application personal statement. It's 843 words as of now, so I'll need to cut it down a bit. I want to know if I'm sort of on the right track.</p>

<p>I'll provide more background information when I PM those who want to read it.</p>

<p>If you guys want to read it and give feedback, please PM me! No essay-stealers please!</p>

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<p>i’ll read it if you want me to=)</p>

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<p>I’ll read your essay if you could maybe read mine.</p>

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<p>Bump! I’d like it if someone that’s already graduated from high school could read my essay please! (The 2 posters above me have not, and since I read the rules/suggestions…)</p>

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<p>sure ill give it a go</p>

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<p>Happy to help. Please be patient – it is a busy week for me.</p>