<p>I'm not too sure about my essay topic of my choice, and would like for somebody to look over it. It is very raw right now, as I haven't reviewed nor written the conclusion for it. I'm just overall looking for some advice for it and if I am going in the right direction! :) By the way, this is my first attempt at it and deadlines are soon approaching!</p>
<p>I will be answering this essay topic:</p>
<p>Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.</p>