Insight on an Essay Topic and Question!

<p>I think you missed my point. If the thesis of your college essay is that “seeking happiness is my ultimate goal in life,” well then make sure that that statement is actually true. Is it your goal? If yes, why wouldn’t you hook yourself up to the pleasure machine? If you get any semblance of a philosopher as your adcom, (s)he could very well be disappointed in your statements you throw out there with little intrinsic reflection.</p>