Interesting Common App Essay!?

<p>I was wondering if anyone would be willing to give my Common App Essay a go. I wouldn't mind reading yours, if you have one, either. It's about a belief I challenged. THANKS.</p>

<p>Sure, I’d love to swap with you - PM me yours and I’ll PM you mine with comments on yours.</p>

<p>PM me :D</p>

<p>I have several years of experience as a tutor and writing coach, and I’ve edited a bunch of essays on CC so far this summer, so hopefully I can be of help to you!</p>