Interesting Why Yale Essay - need readers

Colleges & Universities A-Z Yale University
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<p>I'd like to share my "Why Yale?" essay. I think it is really clever, and witty. I just hope it isn't unoriginal. </p>

<p>I need quick feedback. Within 5 minutes of when I send it to you please. So only ask for it if you can give me immediate feedback. (Remember, its only 500 characters).</p>

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<p>Yeah I have time, i’ll read it for you!</p>

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<p>I can give quick feedback, send it along.</p>

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<p>I can give feedback.</p>

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<p>Yeah sure. Message it to me?</p>

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<p>Sure, PM it to me.</p>

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<p>send it over, I’ve been giving advice like crazy tonight.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a looK!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look as well.</p>

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<p>Yeah I can help you out as well.</p>

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<p>I’ll look at it and give you some advice</p>

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<p>I’d be glad to take a look.</p>

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<p>You can send it to me as well, if you want.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look - PM me :)</p>