International Essay Help

<p>I wanted to ask if any of you parents would be willing to read my common application essay and possibly the supplemental essay I've send to some colleges already. I've decided to apply to a couple of other colleges that use the January fifteenth deadline with these same essays, but suddenly became a little afraid that my essays are actually completely different than what we are supposed to send in! I am an international student and one of the few applicants from my country applying to any US college, so beside my CC-knowledge, I don't know too much about the application process and especially application essays.</p>

<p>I understand this might not be listed in the right subforum, but I was quite hesitant about posting information in the essay forum and generally find you parents to be really helpful! </p>

<p>Is there anyone willing to just read my essay and give some feedback about how well they would be received by the top-colleges I have applied to? </p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>