International Student's Crazy Essay

I need someone to help out. I’ve read a lot of dont’s for essays and I think I have stayed clear but my first draft still seems crazy. It’s about how my background shaped me. I mean, I want to be the real me but I don’t want to risk seeming like an unstable applicant. I want to double major in psychology and Economics and I am particularly fascinated by devt and abnormal psychology.

Would anyone be willing to read? A honest critique is well needed. Thanks.

Anybody??

PM me. But “crazy essay” isn’t too enticing :slight_smile:

I know, I rewrote it this morning. It seems better…I think
I’ll PM it, thank you!

YES, absolutely.

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Exactly my thoughts! Even if it were free, I wouldn’t patronize them! As a hopeful KWH recruitee, I should be able to at least write an essay!
Thanks a lot everyone!