International Student's Essay

<p>Would any one be willing to read my common application essay? I am an international student, so I'd be grateful if you could give me some comments or opinions in that context. Do I stand out as an international student? Is the topic suitable? (I try to highlight what differentiates me from other Asian students)Is my writing style clear and appealing?
You kind of lose the ability to really 'read' your own essay after editing it so many times.</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll read it, PM me</p>

<p>Pm me your essay.
I would love to read it :)</p>

<p>pm it to me please</p>