Is anyone welling to look over my college resume for errors?

<p>I have it saved as a word file so I would be more than happy to e-mail it to you. It would be a great help, I need LOTS of feedback.</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

<p>If you don't want me to Email it to you, here it is in plain text;</p>

<p>Extracurricular Activities</p>

<p>Activity: SGA
Position(s) Held: Class President
Years Involved: 4
Details: I have been the elected class president for 4 consecutive years at my high. Being elected class president for 4 years is rare and has not been accomplished at my school for over 5 years. As class president I have had many responsibilities such as being in charge of fundraisers, homecoming festivities, talent show acts, pep rallies and most recently my schools prom. Next year I will continue my work and organize graduation. I have attended many county SGA meetings as well as school SGA meetings. In addition to this I also attended a leadership conference run by the Maryland Association of Student Councils.</p>

<p>Activity: Young Democrats
Position(s) Held: President, Vice President, Publicist
Years Involved: 4
Details: I started out as just a member my freshman year of high school and worked my way up. This year I have the honor of being the president of Young Democrats. In the past years I have done many activities with the club including attending protests, working on campaigns and registering students to vote.</p>

<p>Activity: Students Taking Action Now; Darfur (STAND)
Position(s) Held: Vice President, Publicist
Years Involved: 4
Details: A nation wide club that raises money to aid in stopping Genocide in Darfur. I have worked with my schools chapter by organizing multiple fundraisers and spreading awareness about the Genocide in Darfur. </p>

<p>Activity: National Honors Society
Years Involved: 1
Details: NHS is a recognition program for American high school students who show achievement in scholarship, leadership, service, and character. As a member of this club I tutor students and promote academic success around my school. I have only been a member this year because only upcoming Seniors can apply.</p>

<p>Athletics</p>

<p>Sport: Varsity Indoor Track
Years: 2</p>

<p>Sport: Varsity Outdoor Track
Years: 2</p>

<p>Volunteer Work</p>

<p>Organization: Barack Obama Campaign
Activities: Phone Banker, Canvasser
Years: 1
Details: I worked for Barack Obama’s Campaign office during the election year.</p>

<p>Organization: Red Cross
Activities: Registration Manager
Years: 4
Details: I have managed the registration for my schools semi-annual blood drive for all of my years at my school. </p>

<p>Organization: QOHS Graduation
Activities: Student Ambassador
Years: 3
Details: I escorted dignitaries into graduation and helped with the set-up and clean up of graduation. </p>

<p>Organization: QOHS Health Department
Activities: AIDS Peer Educator
Years: 1
Details: I attended a NIH seminar about AIDS and HIV and then spent a few days teaching my peers about the virus.</p>

<p>Organization: QOHS Freshman Orientation
Activities: Student Ambassador
Years: 2
Details: I showed upcoming freshmen around my school and helped answer their questions.</p>

<p>Work/Jobs;</p>

<p>Employer: Quinoas Subs
Position: Assistant Manager
From: August 2006
To: September 2008</p>

<p>Employer: Child Tree House Assessment Center
Position: IT Specialist
From: July 2008
To: January 2009</p>

<p>Awards</p>

<p>-Leadership And Service Award
-Scholar Athlete Award
-Honor Roll</p>

<p>my school’s prom needs a '</p>

<p>Talk about what you have learned from your ECs, not just a summary of what you did.</p>