<p>I'm naturally a pretty inarticulate writer, so I was completely stuck on my personal statement until I just made myself keep typing for fifteen minutes. I just let the ideas flow but my essay sounds really choppy and all over the place. Is anybody willing to read it and give me some feedback on how I can improve it?</p>
<p>ill help you if you’ll help me. </p>
<p>how do you read people’s essays on here?</p>