Is Anyone Willing to Give Me Some Feedback on my Essay??!!?

<p>Hi guys,
If you could give me some feedback on my common app essay, I would really appreciate it. I'll PM you the essay.
P/S: no freshman applicants this year, please!
Thanks. :)</p>

<p>Hello I’m a Duke alumni interviewer and would be willing to read.</p>

<p>I’ll give it a shot. College senior, professional proofreader.</p>

<p>anyone else?</p>

<p>Ill read it too.</p>