<p>Hello! I would be extremely, extremely appreciative if anyone would like to help with my essay. I'm mainly looking for:
A) Feedback on the writing itself
B) Whether or not my answer is appropriate in relation to the prompt </p>
<p>Seriously, I would be grateful forever. and ever. :)
Thanks! Hope you're having a great day.</p>
<p>Sorry, forgot to mention! I’ll be more than thrilled to read your essay, too. Feedback for feedback.</p>
<p>Guys, I hate to do this, but I desperately need help. </p>
<p>If it changes anything, I just wrote an entirely new essay… Prompt 3 on CommonApp, about challenging a belief. Is anyone interested at all? (Sorry to push! I feel terrible asking this!)</p>
<p>I can read it.</p>
<p>is this a commonapp prompt or supplement?</p>
<p>i’ll take a look either way, glad to help. know how you feel, felt like that a week ago :S</p>
<p>CommonApp prompt!
“Reflect on a time when you challenged a belief or idea. What prompted you to act? Would you make the same decision again?”</p>
<p>Private messaging was turned off - maybe for me, at least - so I sent it to both of your emails. Each of you is a lifesaver. Thank. you. :)</p>
<p>Hey, I’m only a high school senior, but if you still need help I’d be happy to read!! I just finished all my essays and got some great help from a few college counselors so I have some tips fresh in my mind. :)</p>