Is anyone willing to read a comon app essay on an unconventional topic?

<p>Hey everyone! So I wrote my personal essay on a topic that is probably not very familiar to anyone but me, but I hope I wrote it in a way that is accessible to readers. This is by no means a final draft, not even close. If someone could please find ways to shorten it or suggest ideas for a different conclusion, I would be eternally grateful!</p>

<p>pm me.n plz can I send you my essay for criticing because my subject is also pretty unconventional.plzz</p>

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