Is anyone willing to read my biography essay and/or 2nd essay, and offer feedback?

I need some feedback on my essays. I don’t really know if they are good or not/ should I go for a different topic.
If you are willing too, please comment so I can pm you?
Any help would be greatly appreciated!

I’m also applying to QB this year :slight_smile: I can help.

sure pm me

pm me if you need a third reader