<p>Hey, I need some help. Can anyone here review my essay. I need constructive criticism, and advice. Tips...small things that can make my mediocre essay a great one.Don't hold back with the criticism(Grammar and Writing has never been my strong points).*Note its really incomplete... I sometimes got bored while writing ot halfway through... and then I'd just completely abandon entire sentences.</p>
<p>I’ll read it! Wanna read mine?</p>
<p>sure, PM me</p>
<p>I’ve sent it to you guys, your feedback will be much appreciated…plz criticize as harshly as you can.</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>I’d love to read and provide my comments. PM me. </p>
<p>Though I am not an expert so its your wish if you want to send it or not! But you will get an honest suggestion :D</p>