<p>If you don't have a conflict of interest (ie applying ED2 or regular) I'd really appreciate it if you take a look at it. I've never been good at personal essays and I know this one is quite awkward.</p>
<p>anyone? .....</p>
<p>I wouldn't mind taking a look! I have no conflict of interest since I got in ED1. Just PM it to me!</p>
<p>I'd be willing to look at it - I'm a current sophomore at Swat. Send it over!</p>