<p>Is it cliche to use a Lord of the Rings reference to open an app essay?</p>
<p>No, it can actually be a good thing, it can show off your personality. But keep it brief.</p>
<p>Why do you need to use a reference? Always find your own words.</p>
<p>Would anyone be willing to read what I have (just this first and last paragraph wraparound)? ADad, maybe you could tell me you if you think I’m not using enough of my own voice?</p>
<p>I’d be willing to read it. Pm me.</p>