Is it game over for me?

I laughed then felt bad because I realized you were serious. Don’t worry, calm down, take a deep breath, and acknowledge what a wonderful person you are. You’ve accomplished a bunch and are set to do more, but you can only do that if you don’t give yourself a stroke before you’ve had the chance.

In my Dartmouth Supplement, I had rephrased one sentence and only deleted part of it before substituting the alternate conclusion. It now reads with one extra word (“had”) that makes no sense whatsoever. I was worried for a few minutes then let it go. If an institution doesn’t understand mistakes like that, they don’t fit me (and Dartmouth does fit me, I hope).