is it ok?

<p>in my essay, I want to tell the reader that i don't like city life because of the chaos, the pollution, and the cold relationship among people. Then i wanna express my dream of travelling all over the world.
is it ok?</p>

<p>i think anything would be good topics if you express what an admission officer likes to see in you.
don’t make people feel like you don’t fit in the soceity, or you’re a weird person that don’t make friends and hate everything while you’re saying you don’t like city life, cause in real life people who attend colleges will mostly work and live in cities, right?
And i also don’t see how hating city life can relate your wish to travel.
of course it will be great if you organize it perfectly.
just my opinion:)</p>

<p>thanks. isa087</p>