<p>Hey guys, I'm trying to make it for the Brown ED deadline this saturday.</p>
<p>Anyone willing to rip my essay apart? It's still very raw, but I'd like to see any comments on it.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>p.s. Preferably not anyone applying to Brown cause I'm paranoid.</p>
<p>Bumpity bump. Anyone? You can unleash all your pent up anger from applications on it!</p>
<p>i'm 09, not applying to brown!!</p>
<p>oops sorry i should've mentioned that ill read it haha</p>
<p>I'll read it, I need something to vent on :P</p>
<p>Ill read it. 09- But I am only applying to UCs.</p>
<p>I'll read it, '09 not applying to Brown</p>
<p>'10, but bored. I'll read it.</p>
<p>Thanks so far guys. Anyone else? Please help! We can trade comments if you have an essay!</p>
<p>I'll be glad to take a look and offer some feedback. Send it over! :)
Btw, not applying to Brown.</p>
<p>I'm not applying to Brown and I'd love to read yours. PM it over :)</p>
<p>Bumpity bump!</p>
<p>Everyone's getting desperate, myself included!</p>
<p>i would be happy to read it, not applying to brown as well</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>I'm gonna hijack my own thread and ask if anyone's willing to read my 150 word activity essay as well. I personally think it could go either way, but it's quite possibly one of the most beautiful reflections I've had ever.</p>
<p>I'm 09 but not interested in Brown. However, you can send me both essays and I'll be happy to give you a speedy reply and critique :D PM me.</p>
<p>i'm 09 but i'm not applying to Brown.</p>
<p>I'll read yours!</p>
<p>btw, want to take a quick glance at my UMich essay?</p>
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<p>Anyone up for a final read before I send it in?</p>