Is my essay on topic with the UC prompt?

College Essays
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<p>Prompt:
Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>

<p>I wrote about how my trip to Hawaii taught me valuable lessons that will allow me to increase my understanding of the world through pursuing knowledge. Is this on track with the prompt?</p>

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<p>yes… your trip is an experience, and it makes you proud to understand the world through knowledge.</p>

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<p>Yep, good luck.</p>

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<p>most definitely.</p>

<p>good luck with your apps.</p>