Is my Essay on topic?

College Essays
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<p>the essay prompt is :What work of art, music, science, mathematics, or literature has surprised, unsettled, or challenged you, and in what way.</p>

<p>and I wrote an essay about a specific experience this summer with a cardiologist, internship day where I got to see him perform a pacemaker operation, and my surprise and interest in the pacemaker and the heart that followed. does this sound like its on topic?</p>

<p>Would anyone like to read it?</p>

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<p>It sounds like it is on topic–a work of science.</p>

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<p>thanks for the reassurance Adad, do you think you could review it, I would really appreciate it, but it is ok if you are busy and do not want to</p>