Is my essay to personal?

[rengb6]

<p>I need opinions on what makes a personal statment to personal. Anyone want to read it?</p>

[spazattack]

<p>I’ll take a look at it</p>

[rengb6]

<p>anyone else? :D</p>

[adrivit]

<p>Send it over!</p>

[Georgeanne]

<p>Do you need a proofreader, as well? I am afraid that if it is ‘to personal,’ there is an issue. :(</p>

[spideyunlimited]

<p>^ Lol.</p>

<p>Well, send it to me :)</p>

[3Point7Student]

<p>I’d like to see</p>

[rengb6]

<p>georgeanne my essays can always use some proof reading! ^.^</p>