Is my essay TOO violent?

<p>Meh, it's not really violent at all. (Well, one person did say I could tone it down a bit.) </p>

<p>Anyways, I'm definitely willing to trade essays!</p>

<p>The prompt for mine is, "live the question," or something like that.</p>

<p>email me at <a href="mailto:spencer.watts@gmail.com">spencer.watts@gmail.com</a></p>