Is my Princeton essay too boring?

College Essays
1

<p>My rough draft is finished, and I really need someone to read and critique. Let me know if you can help.</p>

2

<p>pm me!!! can u read mine as i read yours?!</p>

3

<p>pm me. I’ll read. I’m done with all my apps.</p>

4

<p>I’d be happy to read it.</p>

5

<p>I’ll read it as well if you want another opinion.</p>

6

<p>I’ll read if you read my common app essay?</p>

<p>:)</p>

7

<p>yes. pm me</p>