Is my résumé in the appropriate format?

Applying to College
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<p>Activities
Tae Kwon Do Martial Arts (2005-2011)
Earned and received 1st dan Black Belt, and later 2nd dan Black Belt
Promoted to Junior Instructor
Organize belt rank ceremonies
GTMA Demo Team </p>

<p>School Band (since 2008)
Played Bass Clarinet (primary), clarinet, and saxophone
Sports
Varsity Soccer (2011-2014)
Wrestling (2013-2014)</p>

<p>Experience
Develop youths grow in martial arts
Guided volunteers at College Park Community Food Bank</p>

<p>Community (700 hours)
Volunteer on the monthly College Park Community Food Bank (since 2013). Translator for Hispanic families
Dr Henry A Wise high school library (volunteer since 2013)
Prince George’s Animal County Facility
Coordinate classes at Grand Tiger Martial Arts</p>

<p>Awards
Perfect Honor Roll (11th grade as a whole and current senior year 1st quarter
1st place in PGCC AMATYC Math competition
2nd place Certificate of Excellence in Sparring (tournament)
1st place Best in Sparring (local)
Academic Achievement in Wrestling (2013-2014)
Excellence Award in French
Achievement Sportsmanship in Soccer (2011)</p>

<p>Skills
Speak fluently both English and Spanish
Math critical thinker</p>

<p>References
Reference Available Upon Request</p>

<p>Never mind; it is difficult to original paste it here. CC should work on that. I excluded education because the college wanted an activities resume. </p>

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<p>Suggested changes:</p>

<p>Black Belt, 2nd dan
Martial Arts Junior Instructor
Grand Tiger Martial Arts Demo Team [spell it out]</p>

<p>School Band: Bass clarinet and saxophone (since 2008)
Varsity Soccer (2011-2014)
Wrestling (2013-2014)</p>

<p>Volunteer translator at the monthly College Park Community Food Bank (since 2013)
Volunteer at Prince George’s Animal County Facility (since ___)
Volunteer at Dr Henry A Wise high school library (since 2013)</p>

<p>Perfect Honor Roll [remove parenth but explain “perfect”]
1st place in PGCC AMATYC Math competition [spell it out]</p>

<p>Needs work:
Experience
Develop youths grow in martial arts
Guided volunteers at College Park Community Food Bank</p>

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<p>@NotForEveryone‌ thanks, I didn’t see those minor things in my resume. Not everyone does</p>

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<p>I only listed things I quicly noticed . . . .not implying you should delete the others</p>