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How is it a stronger program? The debate team? Do research! Also, it’s important to note that you’re not bashing the school you’re currently at. I know you didn’t do it in your essay, but some transfer students do it.</p>
<p>“My school only has 14 kids in the debate team, and it sucks! I’m an outgoing person, so I want to meet a lot of new people at University A!!” is different from
“Although _____'s debate team is well structured, the team at University A is larger and that will expose me to completely different~~~~” so on and so forth. </p>
<p>al6200 is right about separating your essay into parts. You should start with an outline and add details. At the end, you’ll be able to connect the parts together. Good luck! :)</p>