<p>My essay's is going to be about how I sold my first fashion retail website at the age of 16 for 10,000 us dollars and how much I want to go into business. </p>
<p>I am applying early d to babson </p>
<p>Is the subject a little not "deep" enough?</p>
<p>No subject is deep. The content had better be.</p>
<p>let’s say I learned the importance of entrepreneurship, diligence, and networking. </p>
<p>would that be considered reasonable?</p>
<p>That sounds generic, to be honest.</p>
<p>Can’t you relate it to something bigger? Tell two stories at once — one about your selling, and another about who you really are.</p>
<p>kk</p>
<p>the trouble is my essay is about me being an entrepreneur</p>