Is this a bad idea..?

<p>I just joined today after browsing through this site for the past few weeks. I think someone here will be able to help me. For the common application "interests" essay I kind of turned mine into a story rather than "this is what i do blah blah blah" would anyone be interested in reading it and telling me what they think/editing it?</p>

<p>i will.............</p>

<p>okay should I PM it to you?</p>

<p>You can PM me too, if you want.</p>