is this a crap essay?

<p>so, i decided to go the non traditional route (seriously, i'm sick of college essays at this point lol) and i submitted a stream of consciousness essay taken directly from my diary.
i was really inspired by steinbeck before i wrote it so i was going hardcore into the intellectual thought process type analysis
the subject matter was like an analysis of society and how we define achievement and how we rank achievement and how in the scheme of things "achievement" is menial...but it seems to be in human nature that we strive anyways
and then i gave my insight as to how people should live...
idk if itll screw me over because its not a traditional essay type thing, but i feel that it's decent because it demonstrates how i think and how i try to put my life into perspective...
let me know. (:
<3sarah</p>