<p>So, my supplement essay for the second prompt (describe what specific qualities of the school you want to attend attract you) is done. I wrote a pretty good essay about LS&A, and how the learning communities, large campus feel appeal to me.
But I thought just to add a touch of personality to the essay, at the very end, I could write (jokingly):</p>
<p>LS&A is really good for me because blahblahblabhlh. I hope to be a part of this community because blahblahlah. it would be an honor to attend UofM because blahblabhlah.</p>
<p>Oh, and the Quidditch team is a HUGE selling point!</p>
<p>Or does this seem too lame?</p>