<p>the beginning did sound a little like a graduation speech so heres my second try:
People in the world are like a bunch of dominoes we have all been set up on a nice path to who knows where. Like dominoes some of us are unstable and shaky, however there are those of us who are stronger and stand firmly planted. I was lucky enough to be a very stable firmly planted domino, because of the world I come from. The real world consists of 6,829,312,799 people, but only the three in my family shaped my dreams and aspirations.
I live in the basic upper middle class, suburban home with the classic white picket fence like in the movies. My room is very ordinary I have a bed, a desk, some windows, and a closet filled with clothes. I have a mother, a father, and a sister which is the outline of the average American family household. They all drive practical cars, and live an above average life. Growing up in such a clich</p>