<p>I am planning on writing my essay on how not qualifying for nationals in debate last year taught me that i couldn't take anything for granted, etc. just some context, i was the dominant debater in my state that year, so it was a big deal for me not to make nationals. is this a good original topic provided i can show some emotion, make it seem like a I discovered value in the negative?</p>
<p>If you wrote it correctly, it could be a great essay. The problem is, I'd be afraid of the essay backfiring and making you seem cocky or pretentious.</p>
<p>If you could make it clear how sure you were going to make it in the opening, it could be great. You could even use an overconfident tone in the opening paragraph- you'd just have to be careful that you didn't scare the reader by the time you got to the next paragraph.</p>
<p>Then, you could reveal: you didn't make it. What emotions were going through you? Was it one of those moments where you didn't comprehend for a moment, thought you misheard, heart sunk, etc.? What happened next?</p>
<p>When did you turn around? At what moment did you have this realization? Was there anything else (an improved work ethic? pursuing relationships with older family members, who you realize will not be around for your entire life? Taking more risks because, without risk, there is no reward?, etc.)</p>
<p>My main concern is that you'll come off as "Oh, I didn't get in the national debate, and now I'm a great, great person that appreciates everything in life!" , which will seem shallow.</p>
<p>It could be great, but I'd go over the concept and what you want to say with an English teacher. Then, write it. Correct any blatant spelling/grammar. Have at least 4 other people (3 people can't be family members, 1 should be the English teacher) read it and ask for a brutally honest opinion. Don't ask people that hate you, but don't ask people that think you're the greatest thing since sliced bread either. (That's why some parents can't review essays well).</p>
<p>The idea sounds reasonable to me.</p>
<p>thanks alot coopjust-yea i'm really focusing on having it come across right</p>