Is this a good start for my USC personal statement??

College Essays
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<p>Hi!
I just started writting my USC personal statement and I'm not sure if the begging is appropriate for the topic.
Can someone please read it and give me any comments???
I really appreciate the help. Thank you!</p>

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<p>Sure PM me, ill help.</p>

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<p>I’ll read!</p>

<p>Sent from my SGH-T989 using CC</p>

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<p>I just PMed you 2 :slight_smile: thank you!</p>

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<p>I just finished mine last night. I would be willing to read yours if youre willing to read mine. PM me if you’d like</p>

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<p>Sure! Just PM it to me Intotheblue4 :)</p>

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<p>pm it to me</p>