Is this a radical essay which will scare the adcoms?

College Essays
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<p>PLZZZZ READ AND CRITIQUE...really worried?
I will PM it to anyone who wishes to read it.</p>

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<p>I will read and provide lots of feedback!</p>

<p><a href="mailto:nick.bottom2@gmail.com">nick.bottom2@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>Thank you very much! Anyone else?</p>

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<p>sure. PM me :)</p>

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<p>PM me, I’d love to have a read.</p>

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<p>Thanks guys</p>