Is this enough(or good enough??)

<p>Ok, is this part of my b-school app good enough?? Take a look:
Music: Viola,a few months
Community Service: 200+ hours,local church
Sports:3 sport athlete, will ATLEAST be on JV team for football and basketball and maybe baseball
Xtra-C:Tutoring younger kids after school, 9th grade b-ball team,recycling team, leadership position in school club(Idk the name,forgot)
SSAT:90 percentile,99 on math,90 on Reading conprehension,70 on verbal(hoping for this to be higher but need much improvement)
<strong><em>Would this be strong enough to get me into Hotchkiss,Lawrenceville,Milton,Taft and/or Exeter</em></strong> With strong essay,strong interview, URM, and great recommendations from teachers but OK 8th grade grades--->but much improvement shown in 9th grade 1st marking period.
<strong><em>What could be improved??</em></strong> ------>THANKS FOR YOUR TIME
AND WOULD HOTCHKISS LIKE ME MORE SINCE IM IN NYC?</p>

<p>Hey, you seem like a decent candidate. Go for it.
Also, Hotchkiss wouldn’t specially like you more just because you’re from NYC. However, it is true that boarding schools appreciate people from underrepresented sides.</p>